My Beast
My Beast is a Big, Tall, Strong, Fast, and Ferocious Lion that can stand, his eyes are red and he has abs. He smells like a monkey with big ears. He also smells like the zoo. He feels like a gigantic blood vessel. He sounds like a little girl screaming as loud as she can.
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ReplyDeleteFakalofa lahi atu Harper,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have described what your beast looks, smells, sounds and feels like., you've made a start so that is good. However the activity asks that you create and describe your own beast, whereas you have described a lion with a few different features from normal lions (abs, red eyes).
Perhaps next time you could add some finer details to what you already have. For example, your beast is described as smelling like a monkey with big ears...what exactly would that smell like? You've got me interested!
I love the movie Fantastic Beasts, have you seen it? One of my favourite creatures from the film was Newt's Bowtruckle, I just thought its tiny green twig like body, leafy head and little brown eyes were really cute!
In order to gain full points for this activity, please re-look at your lion and make a few changes to make it a new creature of your own.
Keep working at it, you've got this!
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.